Chapter 148: End of the book
The protagonist has reached the Foundation Establishment stage, and a new chapter is about to begin.
So, let’s have a few words as a closing remark and say something.
Mainly, this closing remark was written last month, but because I wrote too slowly and procrastinated too much, it was delayed until now, and I forgot to post it yesterday.
Alas, I don’t know how to evaluate my own pace. I won’t say anything and just give myself two punches.
First of all, I would like to thank all the readers for their support, which allowed this book to become a premium product at the beginning of last month.
I still remember the excitement at that time.
Before it was put on the shelf, the editor said that the results were good, with 2,600 subscriptions, but the first order was only 1,000. I thought the book had collapsed.
As a result, I didn’t expect that the results would continue to improve steadily as I wrote, which really surprised me.
Looking back at the plot I wrote, I don’t know what to say.
If 100 points is a full score, I can barely give it a passing grade. Although I can read it myself, there are indeed many problems.
This is also because when I wrote it, I didn’t have a detailed outline, and I just started writing out of temporary interest.
When I was writing, I was thinking of starting with a son-in-law, marrying secular women and having children, and then having children with girls with spiritual roots, girls with spiritual bodies, fairies, princesses, empresses, goddesses, and so on, writing up the levels one by one.
But after I started writing, the content of the plot began to get out of control.
And there will be different ideas every day, and the thinking will continue to diverge.
Writing novels is like this. After writing, there is no way to change the problems. Later, you can only fill in the holes in front.
For example, the biggest pit in this book is actually the plot ideas before and after it was put on the shelf.
When I was in Chapter 52, I realized there was a problem.
My intuition, after reading books for many years, told me that the content was too bland and boring, and it had to be refreshing.
But knowing is knowing, I didn’t know how to make it refreshing or interesting at the time.
So, I released the Qu Changge plot in advance as an expectation.
Then I immediately drew a peach blossom Gu, thinking of increasing the refreshing feeling.
But after writing it, I felt it was still not good. I thought the protagonist was trapped in Qingzhu Mountain, and he had to go out to do things and be refreshing.
So, there is the Nine Dragon Square City plot.
But after leaving Qingzhu Mountain and arriving at Nine Dragon Square City, I felt that there was less warmth of the family, and I lacked a sense of security.
And coming to the square city is also equivalent to opening a new map, and a lot of things have to be laid out.
As a result, after writing, not only was there no refreshing point, but it was also framed to death by daily trivial matters, and the content seemed very watery.
Originally, Zhang Shan, the shopkeeper of the spirit talisman shop, two apprentices, Gao He, the neighbor next door, etc., these characters would have other plot aspects.
But when I wrote here, because the results on the shelf were also collapsed, I was actually very anxious, thinking about how to write it up.
I thought in my heart to give the protagonist something to do, to let the Lu family push the protagonist, and to let the protagonist pretend to be forceful, so I diluted all these bland plots.
The golden core girl’s plot was also advanced for this reason, to improve strength, improve the hole cards, and give the protagonist room to perform.
But after writing this plot and preparing to do something, I found that there was a lack of time to settle down.
Things can’t all come out at once, you have to take it step by step.
At this time, I wanted to lay out the Lu family, to make the Lu family have problems inside and outside, so that the protagonist could do things and show his sharpness, so there was the Lu Miaoyang plot.
But as soon as this plot came out, there was another wave of fun.
The ideas changed back and forth, which affected the subsequent plot path.
There was no way, I could only revise the text.
After this wave of revisions, I gradually gave up struggling.
Because on that day, I also read the book again, and I probably realized where the problem was.
But knowing the problem is knowing, there is no way to go back and change it, and there is no way to get back on track at once.
Moreover, this kind of plot in front has already persuaded many people to quit. If the style changes greatly again, it is equivalent to screening readers.
This is also the reason why everyone has been saying that the rhythm is slow, but the rhythm is still the same.
If you want to say anxious, I must be more anxious than you.
After all, this book has good income. I won’t tighten screws in the future. I can also consider buying a BYD to drive an online car.
But I can’t help it myself, I really can’t struggle anymore.
I don’t know how to write a refreshing plot.
And in this kind of rhythm, it can’t be solved by simply upgrading the foundation building.
Because the time progress has not started, and the protagonist’s children have not grown up, this plot will be difficult to go.
If the foundation is built in a hurry, there is no place to pretend to be forceful and display it. If there is no plot, it will fall into the rhythm of forcibly pulling the plot again, and there will be problems again.
Moreover, my way of writing without a detailed outline or even an outline is indeed a big problem.
For example, after marrying Lu Miaoge’s sisters, I was going to solve the current matter, and the protagonist immediately completed the Qi training and went to Xiancheng to build the foundation.
But in Chapter 128, I was cheap and wrote a love tribulation, which made me feel that this plot should be written for a ten-year appointment, and it should not be delayed any longer.
As a result, after writing it, all kinds of ideas popped up, which made me numb, and I am still writing it now.
Otherwise, this plot, in my current opinion, can be put after the protagonist builds the foundation, and the effect may be better.
After saying so much gossip, everyone knows what the next volume is about.
It is the protagonist who obtains the spiritual land, establishes his own family, and begins to farm and raise children to develop.
Let me explain why the protagonist wants to establish his own family instead of playing the idea of occupying the magpie’s nest and the Tian family replacing Qi.
Before it was put on the shelf, many readers left messages saying that they could occupy the Lu family by having children.
But from the beginning, I never thought of doing this.
First, I think the reputation is not good.
Maybe the protagonist has completely risen, this is a good story.
But in the early and mid-term, I don’t think it’s a good reputation.
Second, if you replace the Lu family, the ancestors of the original Lu family must be sacrificed.
It’s really better to open a genealogy yourself, and the whole family is your own blood descendants to feel it.
And I have always wanted to get a family tree for the protagonist, as well as similar blood treasures, with some functions and effects.
But the people of the original Lu family, whether they are added or not, seem strange.
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Third, since you are an ancestor, you must have obligations and responsibilities.
Of course, your own children don’t matter.
Having spiritual roots to cultivate can also add to the protagonist, so the protagonist can desperately smash money and resources, and even directly use some rewards obtained by the system on the children.
What about the children of the original Lu family?
If this ancestor takes care of all his own blood descendants in the end, I don’t think the reputation is very good.
If you also spend money to train the Lu family children.
Let’s put it this way, before, the protagonist gave Li Feiyu resources, three hundred spiritual stones plus talismans and puppets, and I was afraid that I would give too much.
Just like hiring Gao He to manage the shop, and opening a double salary, I later changed it to 50% more.
After all, this is taking out the protagonist’s money.
That is, taking out the money of all the readers, how dare I be too generous.
So I think that if the limited resources in the early stage are divided to the Lu family to achieve fairness and justice, there will definitely be unpleasant plots.
It’s better to build your own family simply and directly.
As for the Lu family, when the protagonist’s family rises and has the ability, help them a few times, which is much simpler and has a good reputation.
Of course, everyone has different ideas, and my ideas are probably like this (by the way, should I change the ancestor of the Lu family to the ancestor)
As for the plot rhythm, I said before that the protagonist’s cultivation speed will be faster after building the foundation.
This is not only my idea, but the setting of the book also determines this.
Because next, the children must appear.
When the children appear and start to improve, the protagonist is improving.
The more children there are, the better the talent, the faster the cultivation speed, and the faster the protagonist improves.
In the future, 840 million descendants will cultivate for the protagonist, and there will be 840 million true immortals in the body, tsk tsk tsk.
But I don’t know how many words to form the core now.
Because this thing, to put it bluntly, still depends on whether there is something to do, not the time limit in the book.
I don’t have the ability to estimate how much plot and how many words, I’m afraid to estimate and slap my face.
But after writing so many words, I also deeply realized my own problems.
So, I will try to pay more attention to this aspect, reduce some unnecessary branch plots, and don’t insert so many branch plots.
But I feel that there are not too many things from building the foundation to forming the core.
That is, getting the spiritual land may be a little slower, and it needs to be accumulated to prepare for building a family.
Once you have the spiritual land, you can’t run around everywhere when you start farming.
And it’s a bit unreasonable to run around everywhere.
That is, keep a low profile and develop, accumulate food widely, and slowly claim the king.
In this case, if you don’t go out very much, you can’t always have things come to you every day.
That is, some farming harvests, and when the children grow up, they go out to do something, go down to the copy, and write a little plot.
In this case, the plot will naturally be relatively boring, so you have to upgrade quickly, form the core as soon as possible, so that there are new things and plots to write.
As for what happens after forming the core, there is only a rough outline of the development line.
But this may change at any time, so I won’t say much.
Qi training is the most difficult period for the protagonist. He relies on his own efforts and counts as signing in to the mortal cultivating immortals.
Foundation building, the family is just starting, starting to develop steadily, accumulating food widely, building high walls, and slowly claiming the king.
Forming the core is the stage where the family begins to exert its strength and show its talents.
Nascent Soul, probably, half a lifetime of cultivation is unknown, and once you get the law, the world is shocked.
At this time, the Lu family is full of geniuses, and there are some signs of the Lu family’s longevity.
Probably like this.
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Especially seeing some familiar readers who commented and voted when I was only tens of thousands of words, and are still watching now, I am really touched, thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
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